Looking for a demo reel feedback

Hey there!

I've been working on this demo reel (to include in my portfolio) for a while, and I can’t really be objective about the quality anymore 😵‍💫.

This is my first serious redesign and I will be super grateful for any feedback! (Please trash it if you think something is bad, incoherent, lacking, or too much, etc!) 😇

Another thing - it started as a music track but at this point, I’m not sure if I should include music, as it is masking a lot of sounds. What do you think?

Thanks ahead for your time!

Without music

With music