Would love your feedback on this sound redesign

I’ve been hesitant to share my work publicly over the past couple of years, for a mix of personal and professional reasons.

Lately, I’ve been working on changing that. I'm aiming to become more comfortable putting myself (and my work) out there, both to grow and to potentially connect with new opportunities.

As a first step, here’s a sound redesign I created for the Exodus game trailer.

I’d love to hear your thoughts, any feedback is welcome and appreciated.