Update: Only 23s Sound Redesign for Audio House test

Hey everyone. I don’t believe I posted an update to this after everyone’s feedback, but here’s my final version of this redesign. I didn’t mention last time, but this was a sound test for an Audio House. If anyone has a lead on somewhere that needs this type of Sound Design, please refer me!

Note: I decided to keep the VO in, after consulting with several people, because they liked the processing of the VO, despite the acting.