The Last of Us Part II - snowstorm cutscene redesign

Hi. I would really apprieciate your feedback here guys. This is my attempt to redesign an awesome cutscene from beloved TLOU 2 🫶
I have a plan to record some kind of walkthrough of my workflow and overall mindset when approaching challenging sonic scenarios like this one.
But first things first - I’d like to know what can I do better or the other way in your opinion 🙂