Summoning the community wisdom: I re-designed a Generation Zero trailer. I intend to put it into ...

Summoning the community wisdom:
I re-designed a Generation Zero trailer. I intend to put it into a 60-90 sec. reel to apply for in-house positions.

Any advice on what to improve design-wise or what bits to put into the reel we'd greatly appreciated :)

So this one covers the cinematic/linear/cutscene part of the reel. What else would stick into your reel aside from that clip: magic, monsters, foley, UI, ambiance? Stand-alone features (i.e. reloading/firing animation only) or something in the context with the rest of the gameplay mix?