Seeking any amount of feedback!

Hey there everyone, I hope you’re all doing well!

I’ve been hard at work with the second clip of my reel. Its taken me more hours than i’d like to admit, but i’ve gotten it in a place im mostly happy with.

I tried to take all the feedback from last time and show it here in the first clip!

But as always, I’d very much appreciate any amount of feedback you’d like to share.