Second attempt at FPS redesign!

Hello! I am brand new to sound design and have created my second attempt at redesigning a first person shooter. This time, ive layered some audio in logic pro, over footage the VS Recon rifle from Cod 7. Im not trying to replicate the sound of the rifle, just trying to create a believable redesign.

Any feedback is greatly appreciated as im trying to learn as much as possible! Thank you!