EDIT WITH NEW VERSION Need some feedback about this audio re-design

Hello everyone,

Here I am again with another redesign!

With great pleasure, I followed the advice I received from @Giovane Webster and tried to create a quick sound design for this clip, taken from a VFX artist on ArtStation.

I tried to create a mix between the shot of the crossbow and a typical rifle gunshot. However, I feel like something might not be 100% right; maybe the attack of the sound?
Or maybe I'm just being too hard on myself, and it actually works?

Thanks a lot, everyone!

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