"Modern" and "Stylish" Sound Redesign with the old Gundam anime..

I did this far but I really don’t know how I should approach this.

The following two videos are some of the reference of newer version of Gundam Anime I found on YouTube:

I would like to go a little more experimental and cool than those two reference above, in modern way, it doesn’t have to be realistic. In that, I still feel like what I did is not stylish and fancy enough as I imagined.. Should I sacrifice the impact and punchiness on behalf of some experimental approach to achive what I want?, or is there a way to make this type of powerful impact, stylish?

Also, do you guys think there are so many layers? Should I cut down some of the layers and make the other sounds come out clearer?

If you have any reference, cool way to approach, any suggestions, any ideas, feedback all welcome.