Marathon Redesign - Recon Cinematic (Feedback Welcome)

Morning Airwigglers!
I’m trying to spice up my showreel with some designed clips that reflect my most up to date techniques and skills, as well as trying to get them to sound as good as pos! In this one i’ve tried my hand at Voice Design (my own voice), Glitchy Designs, as well as trying to sprinkle in some modern mid rumble. I voiced Recon’s voice lines from the game to make it like they were doing some sort of ultimate ability.

I’d love for some feedback and tips to strengthen the redesign as whole. Please note that the explosion at the end is purely transitional since it’s supposed to lead into another clip.