Looking for Feedback for Redesign Submission

I recently took part in a small competition; the challenge was to redesign the ambience for a short 30 cut from South of Midnight. The caveat was we were given a very restricted sound library and plugin base to work with. I ended up taking first place, but I feel that might only be because very few people actually showed up to it. I’d love to get some actual feedback on how it is! All criticism welcome :)

ps: I’m actually really proud of the raven(?) that flies by, it was actually part of an ambience wav but I think I blended it well.