Horizon Forbidden West Re-Design v1

My MacBook is screaming at me when I try to play in Reaper right now so I thought that would make it a good time to call it for now on this re-design and look for some feedback before I render tracks to make my MacBook not sound like a rocket taking off lol. I’ve found this to be a challenging and busy clip to re-design but that’s part of the fun right. I’m concerned it may lack focus upto this point. Let me know your thoughts and thanks in advance!