Forging Sound for Astartes — My First Full Redesign

Hey everyone!
This is my first full sound redesign project, and I’d really appreciate your detailed feedback. I recreated all the sound from scratch for this scene from Warhammer 40,000: Astartes — every layer, effect, and mix choice is my own.

Since it’s my first project of this kind, I’m completely open to any suggestions, critiques, or advice on how to improve — whether it’s sound design, mixing, or general storytelling through audio.

Thanks a lot in advance — your insights will mean a lot!