Death Stranding Redesign feedback Request

Hi Everyone, I’m a beginner Sound Designer with a background in mixing and live audio. I'm posting Death Stranding’s Cinematic Trailer where I made a complete Redesign. I'm using 20% self made recordings + Synths and 80% Soundly’s libraries.

I’m open to feedback, is there something you hear I’ve should be aware of?

Thank you In advance!