Cinematic Sound Redesign Feedback (Creating My Reel)

Sound Design Reel Update — Cinematic Mini Project — Old School Runescape - Work in Progress - 1st Pass - SFX and Music

Today I worked on a personal project for my reel, a 1 minute redesign using an OSRS (Old School Runescpe) trailer for a slayer boss called A New Threat in Morytania - Araxxor Slayer Boss.

I've been playing this game off and on for most of my life with thousands of hours total.
I'll always love it and to work for Jagex one day would be a dream come true!

Anyways, here's my take on it and as always constructive feedback is welcome!