Biomutant Cinematic Redesign

Happy new year everyone! Have been wanting to redesign this cinematic for the longest time so thought i’d at last give it a go lol. Currently a work in progress and have had to go do something else right now so thought i’d be the first post of ‘24 and see if I could harvest some feedback from you lovely people! The creature noises are just placeholding right now I think. Mainly worried the phaser in the slowmo is ruining the space, opinions? Thanks!