Astroneer Redesign - Feedback

Hey Wigglers!

Over the last 2 or 3 days I’ve been tinkering with this redesign.

I would love to get your feedback on what is and isn't working.

Thanks for your help!

*The last frame (black screen) will be used to transition into another part of my reel that starts in darkness/pitch black. I am still picking the next clip for it, but that’s the thematic idea.

Most of these are original sounds using Vital, Foley, and TTS. There’s a handful of manipulated or layered library pulls.