Anime(jobless reincarnation) sound redesign

it's my first day back to sound designing after a big break. Another day, a friend told me, 'Since you like anime so much, why don't you redesign a scene?' I'm all like, 'Huh, today I feel in the mood to do some magic sounds,' since most of my jobs lately have had a ton of magic sounds. I'm all like, 'Hmm, okay, let's make a sound sandwich.' And this is what I came up with … (SIDENOTE .. i don’t think my daw likes videos