Ambience redesign Silver Pines

Hello,
For the past couple of weeks I’ve been spending time focusing on ambience design and the one around me as well. 😀 Spending time taking notes with the aim to sharpen my ear for detail that makes a space feel “alive” and real.
Here is my attempt to redesign the ambience for a few fragments from the upcoming Silver Pines game.
I used some of my own recordings of vegetation, thunder storms, rain and wind, rattles in combo with synthesized wind layers I made with Phase Plant.

Any critique is welcome.
Would love to know if its believable or not, what may be missing or if this even fits the image and mood. 🤘