100 Best 3D Renders Sound Design Crowdsource

Hey y’all! I’m a bit stuck on my contribution and thought I’d post it here.

Initially I just had some fire sounds and a boom in the background, but realized that it was quite boring. So I added some whooshing and debris after the explosion, like the shockwave/dirtwave is coming towards you but since the clip ends before it has reached you I’m kind of wondering if anyone think it looks weird the way it is now?

I also added a very subtle scream after the explosion, wanting to show how horrible it is in a way. Not sure if it comes through enough.

With that said, I’d appreciate any kind of feedback/ideas/thoughts/emojis 🙏